Score: 10

"Big ol' bowl of..."

submission: Brainless Ent: T L E

date: October 8, 2009

Cheerios starts my day off right.

This animation could have used much more rootmarm.

Score: 2

"Comments on Length and Action Script"

submission: that guy adventures

date: October 20, 2008

Your animation was way too short. I don't mind short animations, but there should be more than 10 seconds worth. I understand that you did this FBF so it's a pain in the ass to do. I give you credit for that.

It also needs to stop. Your animation just loops. You need some action script. On your last frame of the animation, go to Actions and select from among the actions, stick in "stop". Simple as that. You'll need a Replay button to get it to play again, but there are plenty of Newgrounds tutorials to find out how to do that. Or you can forget the "Stop" action and just put in a preloader. Newgrounds has plenty of those and they come with easy instructions on how to use them. The preloader can also act as your replay. Once the animation ends, it will go back to the preloader.

Score: 8

"Looked great"

submission: Welcome To The Machine

date: October 4, 2008

I really liked your choice of colours. I think most would have went for greys and blacks and little red and green lights and what not. Your animation didn't do that and it stands out among much of Newgrounds content.

Score: 10

"So good, you don't care it's short"

submission: Link's Prize

date: April 17, 2008

This is a very articulated and detailed animation. Which makes it ironic, because it is simple in concept. But, that's why I think it's great. Maybe even genius. The only problem I see with it is that those who haven't played Ocarina of Time probably won't get it, though I'm sure it's a small percentage of Newgrounds users, considering all the Nintendo fans (more like fanboys). In any case, this was near perfect and I say I'm going to give you the full 10 out of 10 stars. I think it's well deserved with the amount of work it looks like you put in. Good work!

Score: 9

"Oy vey!"

submission: The Art Of HouseWifery

date: November 14, 2007

It's not sexist. It's satirical. It's ironic. It doesn't believe in itself. This isn't a serious animation - it's a mockery of 1950s gender roles. It's not a nostalgic "Remember how it used to be? Those were great days". Apparently, there are a few people who don't know what satire is. I thought this was hilarious and I think most women I know would think its funny, too - especially the feminist ones.

Score: 10

"BOILING LAVA!"

submission: Tidbits

date: November 14, 2007

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat a great animation. Good work. I like the flawless integration of live action footage. I give it 10 Chili Dogs out of 10.

Score: 5

"Yay!"

submission: Dayvan-Cowboy

date: November 14, 2007

I gave you a 5/5 vote, which I was planning to do as soon as the vote bar loaded, just because of the title. I know I should have actually viewed the Flash before voting, but... it's such a great song. I know. I'm weak. I also gave you a pretty good review considering there was almost no work put into this. Again, a great song. I couldn't resist. In fact, I'm going to watch it again. Yay Boards of Canada!

Score: 8

"I like it"

submission: The Economist

date: November 10, 2007

It was neat. What a strange concept for a game. The graphics were a little crude, but that's okay. I enjoyed the dry humour, too.

"ECONOMICS IS NOT A SCIENCE, AND NEVER WILL BE!" - from Dilbert

Score: 10

"Delicious"

submission: A Wizard Creates

date: November 9, 2007

I like it. It was a cool short piece. The animation was done very well - lots of detail. You can tell that a lot of effort was put into that short amount of space. It's amazing how a little bit can go a long way. Awesome.

Score: 5

"For a first entry..."

submission: Invention No. 13

date: November 9, 2007

... this isn't bad. You seem to have the makings for a good Flash artist. I think all you need to do is put a little more time into figuring out all the little quirks of Flash and with each animation, you'll definitely get better. This was a good start, in any case, but that's all it really is: a start. Keep at it and I think you'll soon be putting out great material.