Score: 10

"Big ol' bowl of..."

submission: Brainless Ent: T L E

date: October 8, 2009

Cheerios starts my day off right.

This animation could have used much more rootmarm.

Score: 2

"Comments on Length and Action Script"

submission: that guy adventures

date: October 20, 2008

Your animation was way too short. I don't mind short animations, but there should be more than 10 seconds worth. I understand that you did this FBF so it's a pain in the ass to do. I give you credit for that.

It also needs to stop. Your animation just loops. You need some action script. On your last frame of the animation, go to Actions and select from among the actions, stick in "stop". Simple as that. You'll need a Replay button to get it to play again, but there are plenty of Newgrounds tutorials to find out how to do that. Or you can forget the "Stop" action and just put in a preloader. Newgrounds has plenty of those and they come with easy instructions on how to use them. The preloader can also act as your replay. Once the animation ends, it will go back to the preloader.

Score: 8

"Looked great"

submission: Welcome To The Machine

date: October 4, 2008

I really liked your choice of colours. I think most would have went for greys and blacks and little red and green lights and what not. Your animation didn't do that and it stands out among much of Newgrounds content.